October 23, 200322 yr http://www.pki-central.com/italianchef/ae1.htm I know he wants feedback on it! (Sorry for the delay chef!)
November 3, 200322 yr Thus far I've submitted my Phantom Theater and Adventure Express stories. I have 2 more in mind. PLEASE submit comments on my past work to help me write my next 2 stories.
November 3, 200322 yr Hi Chef! I read your stories and although I'm not the best journalism critic I have a couple opinions to offer: It was fast-paced and fun. And I assume the ending was intended to be a cliffhanger? The Adventure Express story was more location-driven than character-driven like the Phantom Theater story. I'm sure we're all looking forward to the PKIC/Mars adventure. As someone with NO imagination I would love to see what you do with it! And as a parent of a straight-A honors student who HATES to read, I'm all for anything that gets her to read! So keep 'em coming!
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