Ride On_17 Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 I am humbled and honored that CPfansite (in particular our own chugh43) enjoyed the persuasive essay I wrote for my English class so much that it was posted by the site. Titles "Cedar Point, the Best of the Best" it is why Cedar Point is the best amusement park in the world. Thank you for this; it really means a lot. I'm glad to be around a community of people who I can share my love of roller coasters with. If you haven't already read the essay, you can check it out here: http://cpfansite.com/2014/01/cedar-point-the-best-of-the-best/ 11 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rcwizard13 Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 Wow, fantastic essay! It makes me want to write a essay on the same subject, but for Kings Island. However, I want to point out that in the essay you write, "This past year the park also received Golden Ticket Awards for Best Halloween Event and Best Kid’s Area" (2nd paragraph, 4th sentence). This is false. Kings Island has been granted "Best Kid's Area" this past year as well as the 12 years previous. Overall, though, great essay! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ride On_17 Posted January 21, 2014 Author Share Posted January 21, 2014 Ah, my bad. I just googled for awards Cedar Point received to be sure I included some good ones and that was listed as one of them. Oops, I just never caught that. EDIT: This website states that it is one of the top five parks in the world to receive best Halloween event and best Kids Area. I should have been more clear in my essay. (5th paragraph: http://www.crainscleveland.com/article/20130909/BLOGS03/130909837/-1/blogs03) 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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