Dane Posted October 23, 2003 Share Posted October 23, 2003 http://www.pki-central.com/italianchef/ae1.htm I know he wants feedback on it! (Sorry for the delay chef!) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
italianchef Posted November 3, 2003 Share Posted November 3, 2003 Thus far I've submitted my Phantom Theater and Adventure Express stories. I have 2 more in mind. PLEASE submit comments on my past work to help me write my next 2 stories. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs. G. Posted November 3, 2003 Share Posted November 3, 2003 Hi Chef! I read your stories and although I'm not the best journalism critic I have a couple opinions to offer: It was fast-paced and fun. And I assume the ending was intended to be a cliffhanger? The Adventure Express story was more location-driven than character-driven like the Phantom Theater story. I'm sure we're all looking forward to the PKIC/Mars adventure. As someone with NO imagination I would love to see what you do with it! And as a parent of a straight-A honors student who HATES to read, I'm all for anything that gets her to read! So keep 'em coming! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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