Guest IceCream329 Posted April 17, 2010 Share Posted April 17, 2010 Oh my girl, I have deeply missed you, your sweet aroma of pavement and blacktop, oil and grease, french fires and funnel cakes!!! I have missed your sweet sound, sound of cheerful screams and clinging chains!!!! I have missed your sweet talk, your talk of when the shows begin and our nightly fireworks or our national anthem...Oh but what I have missed the most, being in your presence, my dear, my sweet, sweet dear tomorrow I will come again and we will re-kindle our love!!!!!! Oh Kings Island, after 6 dreadful months, our love has remained, and has the night falls I await the moment when I will see you again....Oh and then I will be able to say.....What a wonderful world!!!!!!!! I wrote it for my facebook status and posted a song....I was board but lol:D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CincyMan98 Posted April 17, 2010 Share Posted April 17, 2010 MY POEM! ^Nice poem BTW, but mine's better! Haha, jk. Kings Island Wonderful steel rainbows of speed Wood structures rattling against the roughness Water springing from the tower's gracefulness Launching into darkness With a large sound Rumbling, rattling, shaking Thrills and chills Being sent up throughout my spine Gives me the chance To Realize how wonderful it is. Kings Island. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest IceCream329 Posted April 17, 2010 Share Posted April 17, 2010 Oh I do like yours Firehawk123....but I feel that mine has a little more emotion in it!!! lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Interpreter Posted April 17, 2010 Share Posted April 17, 2010 Kings Island Where Else? Come and Smell The Funnel Cakes The FUN & Only Ride On! Your First Ride Could be Your Last... Come on, get happy! Terpy, not the poetic type, using poetic license* *with apologies to one Don Helbig Where the magic of the doggies meets the thrills of a lifetime, owner after owner after owner! Long may it be so Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beastrider97 Posted April 17, 2010 Share Posted April 17, 2010 I am not nearly as creative as you guys.... So I'll write a hiaku The train tilts over Screams are heard Falling down I know it's amazing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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