I am making these videos for Kings Island on Dinosuars Alive! Tell me what you think.

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Well, to start with, dinosaur is spelled dinosaur, not the way you have it...

Well, to start with, dinosaur is spelled dinosaur, not the way you have it...

Ok, this is kinda a draft, though. Just wanted to see what you guys thought.

I found the font to be a little difficult to read but overall I think your concept is neat.

So you think I should go ahead and continue and perhaps change the font?

Certainly continue if you are enjoying doing it. You might also want to try combining different shots of the dino for the video. That way while you are doing the voice over, the viewer stays interested in the shot. When you use one single shot it can tend to drag on. Those are just my opinions and suggestions

Ok, you have a good point. This is not a finished copy, so when it opens I will take into consideration all of your thoughts. Thank you!

I am making these videos for Kings Island on Dinosuars Alive! Tell me what you think.

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You have a great voice for radio or some kind of documentary show for the History Channel!